15. Volcanoes: Shield or Composite?
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Volcanoes: Shield or Composite? Errors
There is more than one type of volcano.
Volcanoes are identified by their shapes and the materials from which they
are made. Mount St1
Helens is a shield2
volcano. A volcano of these3
type is made from the lava and debris of repeated eruptions. Alternating
layers of lava and ash build up to form the classic volcano shaped like a
cone. Mauna Loa is an4
shield volcano. Lava flows from one vent5
to form a low mountain. Most shield volcanos6
have many craters on their summits.
- St. Helens--Punctuation: period in
abbreviation
- composite--Content: see upper half of
illustration
- this type--Grammar: agreement of adjective
with noun in number
- a shield--Grammar: a before consonant
sound (article)
- from several vents--Content: see lower half
of illustration
- volcanoes--Spelling
Volcanoes: Shield or Composite?
Corrected
There is more than one type of volcano.
Volcanoes are identified by their shapes and the materials from which they
are made. Mount St. Helens is a composite volcano. A volcano of this type
is made from the lava and debris of repeated eruptions. Alternating layers
of lava and ash build up to form the classic volcano shaped like a cone.
Mauna Loa is a shield volcano. Lava flows from several vents to form a low
mountain. Most shield volcanoes have many craters on their summits.